| I like the unabashed wordiness of their argument, as the demands of duty are wrestled with, at length. |
| However, journalism did not change overnight and it still indulged in the Soviet practice of wordiness and high-flown rhetoric. |
| Margerie suggested characters and plot turns, added sentences, and cut back Lowry's wordiness. |
| Seidensticker can sound too cut-and-dried, while Washburn errs on the side of wordiness. |
| Avoid wordiness and complicated formats that draw attention away from the information. |
| Concise communications are to the point and avoid unnecessary elaboration, superfluous detail, redundancy, and wordiness. |
